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Underwater Photo Contest Entry
Payaso del cico by Francisco F Kyle
by: Francisco F Kyle
Payaso del cico
votes: 20
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posted: Monday, August 15, 2011
category: Macro - Close-Up
location: Caribbean Sea Mexico
message this message is importantPhoto critique post 1

HI,
thank for your latest submission to the UWP contest smile
You've requested a critique of your photo. How it works :
I will structure my critique into a few chapters and will list some suggested solutions to problem zones
( if there are any ). My critique will be like 2-3 posts in total, please wait with any answers untill
you see the note "photo critic completed" - thanks smile
As we photo critics do this job as volunteers, a "thank you" is always appreciated
( no "thanks" = no more critiques ).
Photo critiques here at UWP are meant to give a helping hand with
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The objective is to see you here as winner one day smile
And here we go ( critique/review starts with the next post

 		Doc Dray
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message Photo critique post 2

Hi Francisco.

First impression
Nice photo, realy like the contrasting colors from yellow and purple. Technical ( score from 1-6, best is 6 )
Exposure : 4, Colours: 5, Sparpness: 5, DOF ( depht of field ) : 4.5, Contrast : 4
Suggestions : A slight reducting of the strobe would have been better. There are a couple of white dots from back scatter, try to get rid of them with the spot healing brush tool or clone tool.
Composition
The fish is a bit to tight in the picture, needs more space bottum and top. Also the left side could use a bit more. From the look of the format it seems that you cropped it. Try to recrop and see what you think. The position however is good slightly turned works.
Suggestions :
See the above. For the rest be very happy with this photo. Well done . I will vote for you.

Happy Bubbles, Dray van Beeck
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--------Photo Critique completed--------
 		Doc Dray
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message Thenks really I appreciate a lot wat you do fore peopel like me I ben in to photography fore 8 month and tour help mins a lot for me thenks agen sorry fore my speling cool
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