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  Dear Ashley,
Thank for your latest submission to the UWP contest 
You've requested a critique of your photo. How it works :
I will structure my critique into a few chapters and will list some suggested solutions to problem zones ( if there are any ). My critique will be like 2-3 posts in total, please wait with any answers until you see the note 'photo critic completed' - thanks
As we photo critics do this job as volunteers, a 'thank you' is always appreciated (no 'thanks' = no more critiques ).
Photo critiques here at UWP are meant to give a helping hand with an analytic review & to suggest solutions. The objective is to see you here as winner one day
And here we go ( critique/review starts with the next post ) !
| Jim Garland
2634 point member
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Hey Jim,
where is the promised "next post" ? Please complete this critique - thanks a lot !
Rico
| Rico Besserdich
19672 point member
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Photo Critique
First impression
Moody wreck interior shot, with foreground and ambient light background.
Technical ( score from 1-6, best is 6 )
Exposure : 3, Colours: 3, Sparpness: 4, DOF ( depht of field ) : 3, Contrast : 3
Suggestions :
Not enough of the foreground illuminated.
Composition
Foreground could be interesting but not enough has been illuminated making it difficult for the viewer to recognize/identify.
Suggestions :
Use a strobe and try a illuminate more of the foreground subject.
| Jim Garland
2634 point member
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I think the image almost worked but I feel you need introduce more light into the subject, particularly selectively lighting areas of interest.
All the best,
Jim Garland - website - Award Winning Wreck Photography.
| Jim Garland
2634 point member
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thanks Jim for the critique. I took the picture with my torch as i had no strobe with me on that dive but i understand what you mean and will work on that for sure mate.
Cheers,
Ash
| Ashley Hemraj
229 point member
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