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Underwater Photo Contest Entry

Taken by: Jacopo Brunetti

big family
big family by Jacopo Brunetti
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Posted: Friday, February 17, 2012- (2/17/2012 9:40:00 AM)
Category: Wide Angle - Natural Light (no strobe)
location: Pacific Mexico
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message this message is important DearJacobo,
Thank for your latest submission to the UWP contest smile

You've requested a critique of your photo. How it works :
I will structure my critique into a few chapters and will list some suggested solutions to problem zones ( if there are any ). My critique will be like 2-3 posts in total, please wait with any answers until you see the note 'photo critic completed' - thanks smile

As we photo critics do this job as volunteers, a 'thank you' is always appreciated (no 'thanks' = no more critiques ).

Photo critiques here at UWP are meant to give a helping hand with an analytic review & to suggest solutions. The objective is to see you here as winner one day smile

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First impression
Wow that's a cool school in the sunlight grin

Technical ( score from 1-6, best is 6 )
Exposure : 4, Colours: 5, Sparpness: 5, DOF ( depht of field ) : 5, Contrast : 5


Suggestions :
This is great ! Considering that I seldom give a 6 this is very close to perfect! The exposure is just a tick to low. You can change this by changing your settings (not the ISO as 400 should be ok, but S or A) or by taking even more advantage of the sun


Composition
Your main subject is nicely positioned but the dark rock formation in the background attracks the eye


Suggestions :
Try to shot a bit upwards so that the whole school has a blue background. The ocean floor is interesting and should be in the picture, but the school would stand out even better in the blue wink
 
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Schooling fish are amazing subjects. Challenging as well as they move fast. ..and very often run away from us photographers LOL



Suggestions :
You just got these ones in time smile Again you did a job here!!


Epilogue
A great schooling fish picture. I'm a fan. Especially as it was taken with natural light. Love it! Show us more please!

All the best,

Mona rose

Photocritique completed

 
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