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  Photo critique post 1
HI,
thank for your latest submission to the UWP contest 
You've requested a critique of your photo. How it works :
I will structure my critique into a few chapters and will list some suggested solutions to problem zones
( if there are any ). My critique will be like 2-3 posts in total, please wait with any answers untill
you see the note "photo critic completed" - thanks
As we photo critics do this job as volunteers, a "thank you" is always appreciated
( no "thanks" = no more critiques ).
Photo critiques here at UWP are meant to give a helping hand with
an analytic review & to suggest solutions.
The objective is to see you here as winner one day
And here we go ( critique/review starts with the next post
| Doc Dray
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post 2
Photo Critique
First impression
Great subject, but why the circle. Technical ( score from 1-6, best is 6 )
Exposure : 4, Colours: 4, Sparpness: 4, DOF ( depht of field ) : 4, Contrast : 3
Suggestions :
I’m not sure about the tilting of the photo, I think it would look great level. Colours are good. The diver is a great position showing the proportions of the tank. Again I’m awarded with a good photo for the critique. Were it not for the 2 critiques I gave above, I think you could have a winner. Do you have photos without the circle and a level tank? I’m curious to see them. Maybe it would change my opinion about the above.
Well done, keep it up Tobias.
Happy bubbles, Dray
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| Doc Dray
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Thanks, Dray, for the critique. So you mean without the cicle it would be a good picture? I have several pictures from the tank. Here is another one:
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| Tobias Friedrich
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Another great photo Tobias. My wife likes the first one better and I must say the black of the circle adds something. Maybe I would have preferred a full circle not cut of at the edges. So maybe in a square.
Happy Bubbles
| Doc Dray
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Two complete different pictures, same subject. ;-) When I zoom back the Tokina Fisheye completely it gives it the circle effect, but thats the maximum I can get cicle-wise. As well it gives it the maximum wide angle and max closeup.
| Tobias Friedrich
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Than leave it as it is. It's a great picture. You can be proud.
I saw your website and was impressed.
Happy Bubbles, Dray 
| Doc Dray
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