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Pipe Fish with Eggs, I just realize when I download to my... by Sandrady Irwan
by: Sandrady Irwan
Pipe Fish with Eggs, I just realize when I download to my...
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posted: Wednesday, November 02, 2011
category: Macro - swimming
location: Celebes Sea Indonesia
message this message is importantPhoto critique post 1

HI,
thank for your latest submission to the UWP contest smile
You've requested a critique of your photo. How it works :
I will structure my critique into a few chapters and will list some suggested solutions to problem zones
( if there are any ). My critique will be like 2-3 posts in total, please wait with any answers untill
you see the note "photo critic completed" - thanks smile
As we photo critics do this job as volunteers, a "thank you" is always appreciated
( no "thanks" = no more critiques ).
Photo critiques here at UWP are meant to give a helping hand with
an analytic review & to suggest solutions.
The objective is to see you here as winner one day smile
And here we go ( critique/review starts with the next post

 		Doc Dray
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message Post 2

Hi Sandrady,

Photo Critique
First impression : Nice subject very close. Technical ( score from 1-6, best is 6 )
Exposure : 4, Colours: 4, Sharpness: 3, DOF ( depth of field ) : 4, Contrast : 4
Suggestions :
The colours and the sharpness are good. Did you take the photo as it is here or did you crop it? It was strange looking at this photo, I took one similar last year in Lembeh. I also noticed the eggs after the shot. It's a great shot where your composition is spot on. The DOP still shows the eggs clearly. I'm not sure about the sharpness, cannot realy get any details when I look at the bigger picture. But overall a great shot, nice action and good exposure. would have loved to see this on a black background. Like your flabellina. Cary on like this and good luck.

Happy bubbles, Dray
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message Hi Dray van Beeck,

First of all, thank you for your very supporting Critique.

I crop this photo about 10% on the left side because there is a little part of another pipe fish, I think its spouse :). yes I also prefers a black background but the fish always moves. I will try better next time. Thank you Dray and I am looking for another photo critique.

grin

Sandrady Irwan
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