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Underwater Photo Contest Entry

Taken by: Marco Chang

shine squid
shine squid by Marco Chang
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Posted: Tuesday, November 8, 2011- (11/8/2011 9:05:00 AM)
Category: Macro - swimming
location: East China Sea Taiwan
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HI,
thank for your latest submission to the UWP contest smile
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Doc Dray
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Photo Critique
Hi Marco,
First impression : Nice subject very close. Technical ( score from 1-6, best is 6 )
Exposure : 4, Colours: 3, Sharpness: 4, DOF ( depth of field ) : 4, Contrast : 4
Suggestions :
The colours and the sharpness are good.A shame it's not from the front but still it works. A good thing you can see the eye. The only real critique I have for you is the composition. I think a portrait view would have worked better. There is not enough space at the bottom. It's good there is more space on the right compared to the left side. You can see a direction. I know how it is, you have to be fast and the subject is not a model that will turn in whatever direction you want it. All in all a great photo and I wish you luck with future shots.

Happy bubbles, Dray
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message thank you for your Photo Critique ^_^

sorry my english is not good

Marco
 
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