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Underwater Photo Contest Entry
"Under the Sun", Sharks at Vertigo, Yap Island, Micronesi... by Dieter Kudler
by: Dieter Kudler
"Under the Sun", Sharks at Vertigo, Yap Island, Micronesi...
votes: 20
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posted: Monday, April 02, 2012
category: Wide Angle - Marine Life
location: Philippine Sea Micronesia
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Dear Dieter
Thank for your latest submission to the UWP contest smile

You've requested a critique of your photo. How it works :
I will structure my critique into a few chapters and will list some suggested solutions to problem zones ( if there are any ). My critique will be like 2-3 posts in total, please wait with any answers until you see the note 'photo critic completed' - thanks smile

As we photo critics do this job as volunteers, a 'thank you' is always appreciated (no 'thanks' = no more critiques ).

Photo critiques here at UWP are meant to give a helping hand with an analytic review & to suggest solutions. The objective is to see you here as winner one day smile

And here we go ( critique/review starts with the next post ) !

 		Tn Diver
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message Photo Critique

First impression: One of my favorite subjects to photograph and I love the lines created by the wide angle ! Nice job!

Technical ( score from 1-6, best is 6 )
Exposure : 5, Colours: 5, Sparpness: 4, DOF ( depht of field ) :5, Contrast : 5


Suggestions :
The image is good but I think a little closer would have provided a bit more sharpness.The shark in the forefront seems to be a bit fuzzy. Great job not blowing out the belly of the shark.


Composition: The composition is great!


Suggestions :
Closer to the subject is all I can suggest! Great job and I look forward to seeing more of your work!
 		Tn Diver
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message Hello Steven,
Thank you for the effort, I appreciate it. I am new to UW-DSLR and I am still trying and learning and critics like yours help me a lot. And I promise you will see more from me in the near future. grin
Kind regards, Dieter
 		Dieter.kudler
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